Excerpt from my work in progress, EVERYTHING IS HORRIBLE NOW.

Off to the right was another building—a ranch-style home painted white with green trim and shutters. Two rocking chairs sat on the deep porch to either side of the entrance. The upper half of the front door consisted of two rectangles of opaque, beveled glass. An old-timey brass knocker in the shape of a crucifix was set into the middle of the door beneath the frosted panes. Seven steps led up to the porch. On the bottom-most step stood a tall, gaunt man in a dark-red doctor’s coat. The bald head angled down. Robert could not see the face. Stick-figure arms dangled at the stranger’s sides. No pants or shoes. The showing skin bloodless and taut. Knobby knees and skeletal, hairless legs stuck out from the bottom of the coat. The stranger bent an elbow, raised a hand, waved. The fingers had too many knuckles.


Everything is Horrible Now, by Edward Lorn

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7 thoughts on “Excerpt from my work in progress, EVERYTHING IS HORRIBLE NOW.

    1. This one is going to run the traditional market (Random/Penguin, Hatchette, HarperCollin, and so on), but if they don’t buy it, the cover I’m going to use is on this site. Go to the page titled $50 Covers to see it.

      1. fuonlyknew

        Nice and creepy. I always like the woods in horror stories. That new one by Gregor Xane is cool too. I read it when he had his old cover. This is much better. Like you’re on the bike.

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